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16 March 2006 @ 09:41 am
My first drabble! Yay!  
TITLE: "This is not like you"
CHALLENGE: n/a
WORD COUNT: 296
RATING: Work-safe, granny's-safe, wherever-safe
AUTHOR COMMENTS: The second drabble I write in my whole life, and first in English. Don't shoot me. And no, I don't own a car for you to pierce its tires or scratch its bodywork with your keys. Sorry to dissappoint you.


"Shimako, honestly, this does not suit you at all."

Yoshino looked at Shimako as thought she was staring at something unprecedented, such as the Holy Grail, or the alien spaceship of Area 51. For Yoshino, seeing something so weird in the Rose Mansion was way too shocking, specially if it was something concerning of of her best friends.

"What is wrong with it?" Shimako asked.

"This isn't like you, I mean, you don't need to do such a thing"

"I just... I just want my Onee-sama to pay me some more attention."

"But you're going too far with this, Shimako."

"Please, Yoshino, do not overdramatize."

"I'm not overdramatizing. I'm just trying to tell you this is stupid" Yoshino looked at Shimako's expression, and the she realized why she did not want to be so harsh. Shimako ceased to look at her directly and stared to her own face in the mirror in fron of her.

"That was very rude of you."

"I didn't mean to, Shimako. I'm sorry. But try to understand what I'm trying to tell you is that you're OK the way you are... no, not OK, you are great the way you are. And I see no point in thinking your Onee-sama is going to like you more like that."

"Are you serious, Yoshino?" Shimako looked at her again, smiling.

"Yes, I am. Why so insecure all of a sudden? This is not like you, either!"

"I suppose you are right, Yoshino" Shimako carefully took one of Yoshino's hand and caressed it tenderly.

"Furthermore..." For a moment, Yoshino was afraid of being too harsh on Shimako again, but she concuded she had to be honest to her friend. "Sorry if I sound a bit rude again, but you look awful in pigtails, Shimako".
 
 
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shetan83shetan83 on March 16th, 2006 09:00 am (UTC)
HAHAHAHA!

I was trying to figure out what Shimako had done that was so strange. Pigtails! Haha! That's freaking hilarious.
sakuraflower on March 16th, 2006 09:24 am (UTC)
LOL! I agree, the image of Shimako in piggy tails is so funny!
Well done!!
CAAAAAAAAARI, Bitches._disi_ on March 16th, 2006 10:01 pm (UTC)
ROFL
(Anonymous) on February 16th, 2010 05:25 am (UTC)
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ok eso estuvo genial XD
enserio muy gracioso felicidades y aparte bastante original si me permites decirlo jajajaja.